Thursday, May 14, 2009

55 words challenge- Take it or miss it!

What you shall be reading is a new adventure i'm going to undertake,starting TODAY!

Simply put, its conveying a story in 55 words or less. Yes, that means the 'and' and 'i' matter here. So loaded with my chopping scisors i've attempted something.

Hope you enjoy reading it as much as i loved writing it.

Waiting for your reactions!

The Light isn't Far!


His head ached, eyes were sore but he promised to himself whatever happens, he wouldn’t stop.

He would anyhow reach the light not so far away. . After all, it was his final hope!

Pushing forth the last notes left on him on the counter, he smiled.

In his hands was a pouch of local alcohol.

3 comments:

  1. HA HA HA... even u have 56!!!
    but good work... u r starting to get the hang of it! waiting for more!

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  2. cool concept and nicely executed .. the twist in tale shows glimpses of roald dahl

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